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Educate the crimes in the prison - essay band 5.5+


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Studies show that criminals get low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce the crime is educating people in prison so they can get a job after leaving prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, it is often argued that the finest measure to decrease the transgression is educating people in prison, and then they who released from prisons have a stable job. While some people believe that the people who have the wrongdoings should not educate in the prison, it is my opinion that they can be learnt good knowledge.

On the one hand, the crimes should not educate for some main reasons. The first cause is that mostly people who went to prison have strong personality, and we should not impose rules on them. For example, my neighbour who went to prison cannot be educated by his parents when he was a child.  The second reason is that the people who have the misdeeds can lack of education in the past, and they will not perceive the importance of education. They learned the misdeed in the long time, and the manipulation for them to good behaviour is greatly difficult.

On the other hand, I believe that it will be better if the individuals who have the wrongdoing are educated by authority. First of all, most the crimes who are stand trial feel repent the felony behaviour of them and this time, they are educated greatly and easily by governments. Secondly, the crimes can take part in the operations which trains them to the job skills when leaving prison and those will not seduce by transgression.

In conclusion, I accept that the crimes are not educated, I think that it will better if they participate the educations.

(255 words written by Thế Trung)

 

 

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